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You guys did a good job with your YALE essays: for the most part, I felt most of you answered the question to some degree, albeit, not perfect. Some of you misunderstood what the question was asking, while others didn't emphasize their stance, strongly. It is important to implore/persuade your reader to choose you to come to their prestigious school. Why should they consider you? What makes you so special? You have to PERSUADE them; CONVINCE them. Think of it as life and death, if you don't get into Yale, you're gonna _______________.
We're gonna rewrite this paper. I...
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